Talk:Wings (Little Mix song)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:36, 15 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

General

Lead

whilst → while
Put The Hot 100 first
Write "chart" after each of the US charts.
The clip is depicts → Remove "is", makes no sense.

Background

performing the single in front → performing in front
based on the group's → and the lyrics are based on the group's

Release

with their fans on Twitter,[12] The group → I'm guessing the comma should be a full stop.

Composition

According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Sony/ATV Music Publishing, → Don't need this bit.

Weekly charts

2012 peaks should be in a separate table to 2013 peaks.

References

Digital Spy should not be italics.
Neither should Capital London
Neither should Virgin Media
Neither should australian-charts.com
Neither should Irish Recorded Music Association.
Neither should BBC
Neither should MTV News, MTV Buzzworthy or MTV Australia.

Status

Sorry it took so long. In general, it's a pretty good article. On hold. — AARON • ^TALK 21:51, 12 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done All issues addressed! :-) Littlemixlove (talk) 17:59, 14 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing — AARON • ^TALK 20:06, 14 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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