Talk:Winchester Highlands station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:45, 16 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Should be able to review this in a few hours from now. Claiming this now just in case anyone else nabs this! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 00:45, 16 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Good to see you so soon! I have left some comments below. As you know by now, please do ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I can know when to reevaluate. Thanks, 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 05:06, 16 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@LunaEatsTuna: Thanks for the review! Your ability to thoroughly review so many articles is impressive and much appreciated. My comments below. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 05:48, 16 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

As are your quick responses; I get to review more articles on a quicker basis that way! I am happy with your changes and can now pass this article for GA status. Congrats! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 06:21, 16 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check

Earwig says good to go.

Files

All images are relevant, of good quality, and copyright-free:

File:Winchester Highlands station, circa 1915.jpg: valid public domain rationale;
File:Derailment at Winchester Highlands (1), May 1923.jpg: valid public domain rationale.

Prose

"and two other low-ridership stations were closed" – word usage looks slightly informal here (unless its rail jargon?); may I suggest "stations with low ridership" instead?
- Done
"Most intermediate stations were added by 1850, though some were added later." – as the sentence starts with most, is the latter line necessary?
- Reworded to clarify a bit - I wanted to make it clear that this wasn't one of the early ones.
  - Oh I see! Thanks for the change.
"a flag stop with a smaller wooden shelter," – wikilink flag stop.
- Done
"(as the tracks were on an embankment);" – probably wikilink to embankment (earthworks); I thought it was near a river at first!
- Done
There are duplicate refs at the end of the sentence starting "the lower level housed the station agent and his family."
- Done
"4 round trips in 1946, 2½ in 1952, and 1½ in 1957." – I am confused; what is half a round trip exactly?
- A one-way trip - a bit jargony, unfortunately. There's no other simple way to state it, so I added a slightly wordy clarification.
  - I like the way you fixed it.
"1943-built shelter is no longer extant." – I have never seen such usage before (keep it if it is academic standard in American English); recommend "The shelter built in 1943 is no longer extant."
- Done Not improper in en-us, but I've reworded to clarify.

Refs

All sources cited are RS. Passes spotcheck on refs 1, 4, 9, 14, 17, 23 and 25.

Use template:cite map for ref 7.
- Done
Ref 28 appears to be an incorrect link.
- Done

Other

Short description, external links, coords, cats and infobox all good.

Recommend adding template:use mdy dates
- Done
Recommend adding template:use X English
- Done

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