Talk:William de Longchamp/GA1

GA Review

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Hi there, I am happy to tell you that this article has passed GA without the need for any further improvement. Listed below is information on how the article fared against the Wikipedia:good article criteria, with suggestions for future development. These are not required to achieve GA standard, but they might help in future A-class or FAC review process.

• It is reasonably well written.

  a (prose): b (MoS):

Decent prose, 7/10

• It is factually accurate and verifiable.

  a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

• It is broad in its coverage.

  a (major aspects): b (focused):

• It follows the neutral point of view policy.

  a (fair representation): b (all significant views):

• It is stable.

  

• It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.

  a (tagged and captioned): b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA): c (non-free images have fair use rationales):

• Overall:

  a Pass/Fail:

Minor comments

• "He was born in Normandy, and some of the later difficulties he had governing England for King Richard I of England may have been due to his differing views of government from the English." - can you be a little clearer? I think you mean that he was raised under a different political system and brought his understanding of politics to Britain, but its not totally clear.
• "but this is unlikely" - why?
• "On Richard's accession" - although I know what you mean, perhaps explain this a little more clearly for those unfamiliar with the royal meaning of accession.
• Northampton Castle, Tickhill Castle and Dover Castle have their own articles, link to them.
• Decide whether priory should be capitalised or not and be consistant.
• Capitalise Emperor when referring to a specific one.

Thankyou and congratulations, an excellent addition to Wikipedia:Good Articles. All the best.--Jackyd101 (talk) 00:33, 10 February 2009 (UTC)