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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 16:47, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Added archived link.
WP:LEAD
  • Added.
Early life and college
  • Done.
  • Reworded simply to "season's final contest". Better?
1890s
  • Reworded. It now reads: "Wurtenburg did not remain at the Naval Academy the following year and was replaced as head coach by Matthew McClung." Is this better?
  • I changed the title, since the section is really about his entire life after college. Is this alright?
1900s and death
  • Clarified.
  • No, although it likely could.
References
  • Removed
Images
  • Punctuated.
  • I honestly have no clue what is going on with the picture. It was uploaded back in 2009, and it appears that User:Cbl62 found a better picture of Barbour and uploaded it over the original. I'll upload the old version to commons later today.
  • I'll assume good faith.
  • Personality rights added to Wurtenburg's picture. Barbour's image was uploaded here instead of the commons, so I have to wait until it is transferred to add personality rights.