Talk:William Hodgson (RAF officer)/GA1

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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 05:06, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comment

I plan to review this article. Djmaschek (talk) 05:06, 20 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Review 1

@Zawed: Sorry, I got distracted for a few days. Normally, I find numerous errors, but your grammar and syntax are excellent. There is only one issue to fix for GA class. Djmaschek (talk) 19:15, 26 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

In the London Gazette quote, it reads, "and damaged a Heinkel in." Shouldn't this read, "and damaged a Heinkel 111"? If this typo was in the original article, you might want to add "[sic]". Otherwise, please fix.

Thanks, Djmaschek. Yes, the "in" was a typo (possibly an OCR issue) in the html version of the citation that I cut and pasted. It should be 111, and I have now fixed. Thanks again, Zawed (talk) 21:05, 26 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA class. Djmaschek (talk) 21:52, 26 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]