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Former good articleWilliam Hamlin was one of the Social sciences and society good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 5, 2021Good article nomineeListed
February 26, 2023Good article reassessmentDelisted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on December 12, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that William Hamlin was the first engraver for the state of Rhode Island?
Current status: Delisted good article


William Hamlin

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Created/expanded by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 16:46, 9 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:William Hamlin/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:23, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "1772 – 1869)" unspaced.
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  • "state of Rhode Island" link.
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  • "He did a" yuck, made?"
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  • "He is well known for portrait engravings" maybe "He also made a number of portrait engravings of...
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  • "Hamlin was involved" also
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  • "He made sextants, quadrants, and refractor telescopes. He built the first " these aren't musical instruments, worth

introducing properly, and merge these sentences.

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  • "available to use by the public for astronomy" for astronomy? Well what else would it be used for?
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  • "Capt" abbreviation? Is it even needed?
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  • "Their other children (and Hamlin's siblings) " not sure the parenthetical clause is needed.
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  • "b.1774)" etc, space after b.
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  • "His father's occupation was as a pewterer" His father was a ...
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  • "He was a person of scientific skills, even though he was self-taught on these technical abilities." opinion.
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  • "goldsmith in Middletown, Connecticut.[8] His" overlinked.
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  • "in 1791.[11] In 1793 " repetitive.
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  • "and did mainly engraving of" -> "and mainly engraved...
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  • " St. John's church" is it the formal name, i.e. Church?
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  • " sold all kinds of" sold various.
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  • "and sheet music with " comma after music.
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  • "Hamlin 1826 telescope admission ticket purchased by those interested in using it." - remove from "purchased...
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  • "become an engraver. His" link it first time.
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  • "His first attempts at engraving were done on copper" "done on" is horrible. maybe "were with"
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  • "and did this as an additional business" delete, and add "also" in the previous part of the sentence.
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  • "The ticket is titled HAMLIN'S REFLECTING TELESCOPE..." none of this is needed, the image is there.
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  • "Hamlin did a variety of engravings" avoid "did" again, maybe "made"?
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  • "were done on order" which were ordered? Requested? Bought?
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  • "Portraits of George Washington are his most enduring legacy" according to whom?
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  • "He did four ..." c'mon...
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  • "death of George Washington" don't repeat his first name.
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  • " his most famous work" says who?
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  • "engraving he did is " last warning.
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  • "that of the Experiment" italics for boat names.
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  • Apply that to the gallery notes too.
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  • "ticket for The Experiment" ditto.
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  • "four of which" four of whom.
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  • "29, 1852. [2]" no space before ref.
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  • Ref 10 and 19 have spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.
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  • ISBNs should be consistently formatted.
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That's my lot. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:50, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for review. I'll get started on it, right after my nap = that's what old people do! --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:15, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:34, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Copyright contributor investigation and Good article reassessment

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This article is part of Wikipedia:Contributor copyright investigations/20210315 and the Good article (GA) drive to reassess and potentially delist over 200 GAs that might contain copyright and other problems. An AN discussion closed with consensus to delist this group of articles en masse, unless a reviewer opens an independent review and can vouch for/verify content of all sources. Please review Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/February 2023 for further information about the GA status of this article, the timeline and process for delisting, and suggestions for improvements. Questions or comments can be made at the project talk page. MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 09:37, 9 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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