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Reviewer: Therapyisgood (talk · contribs) 23:14, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "William Armstrong (disambiguation)" redirects to William Armstrong.
  • Watch for all-caps in reference 5; shouldn't be in all-caps.
  • No images of him?
  • Armstrong was born in 1782 in Lisburn, County Antrim, perhaps add "Kingdom of Ireland"
  • Based on the information available in the source, I believe that Battle of Rullion Green and the Battle of Pentland Hills are one in the same; however, I've left the phrasing as Battle of Pentland Hills with a link to the Battle of Rullion Green in order to stay true to the wording in the source. Let me know if this works! -- West Virginian (talk) 14:45, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • In January 1818, Armstrong was unanimously elected by whom? the public?
  • Armstrong and John Kirk, and Armstrong's wife Jane and John Baker White perhaps add some commas such that Armstrong and John Kirk, and Armstrong's wife Jane and John Baker White becomes Armstrong and John Kirk, and Armstrong's wife, Jane, and John Baker White
  • He relocated to New Creek Station (formerly Paddytown, present-day Keyser)[a] not sure you need the note for the third time.
  • Copyright on file comes back OK. Can you move the file up a bit in that section? It's breaking into the next section right now.
  • His son joined the Confederate States Army Edward, I'm assuming? Can you clarify? Based on the personal life section it could be either of 2.
  • The postmaster preceded and succeeded by in the infobox really aren't referenced anywhere.
  • What makes Historic Hampshire a reliable reference? It looks self-published.
  • What makes Munske & Kerns 2004 a reliable reference?
  • The Historic Hampshire and the Munske & Kerns 2004 books were both co-authored and published by local historians and subject matter experts in Hampshire County and in West Virginia. Both are based on reliable evidence and documentation. Please let me know if I can provide any additional information on these books in the meantime. -- West Virginian (talk) 14:56, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Therapyisgood (talk) 00:28, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Therapyisgood, thank you so much for your thorough and comprehensive review, and for your thoughtful and helpful suggestions and recommendations! I greatly appreciate your time and value your guidance and expertise. Please let me know if there are any outstanding issues with this article in the meantime. I am committed to ensuring that it meets all the criteria for GA. Thanks again, and my apologies for my delayed response to your review comments! -- West Virginian (talk) 14:56, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]