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Reviewer: Fiamh (talk · contribs) 06:41, 26 October 2019 (UTC)
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- What makes Traces of War an RS?
- Removed as these details were not significant. --K.e.coffman (talk) 01:45, 31 October 2019 (UTC)
- Can we get a page number on ref #17 (Burleigh) for verifiability, or cut it if it's in the other ref?
- Removed as duplicate. --K.e.coffman (talk) 01:45, 31 October 2019 (UTC)
- Not related to GA criteria but one minor quibble with the lede: no need to say 'dependable sycophant and habitual "yes-man"', it's redundant.
- Shortened. --K.e.coffman (talk) 01:45, 31 October 2019 (UTC)
- Great work on this article!