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First paragraph of lead could be split (probably best just before "As U.S. Attorney...")
First two sections could be merged into one titled 'Early life and military career' or even just 'Early life'
Well-written throughout
The later life subsection is appropriate in career, but since it's so short, it may fit better if included in a short intro paragraph of the whole Career section (above early career subsection header) - such an intro, with other chronological details, would in general be beneficial since the overall section is fairly extensive and well-divided.
Kingsif: Many thanks, very helpful. I've gone through and made some additional edits. I added some content to the "later life" section so I think the standalone section looks OK now. I tried to find a copyright-free image to add, but I haven't had any luck finding one. Neutralitytalk02:56, 30 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]