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Good articleWhitney North Seymour Jr. has been listed as one of the Social sciences and society good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
September 30, 2019Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 29, 2019.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that in his eighties, former U.S. Attorney for the Southern District of New York Whitney North Seymour Jr. co-wrote and produced a one-act play performed off-Broadway?
In the news A news item involving this article was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "In the news" column on June 30, 2019.
On this day... A fact from this article was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on July 7, 2023.

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Whitney North Seymour Jr./GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 03:42, 29 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this, comments should be added soon! Kingsif (talk) 03:42, 29 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Style

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  • Lead good length for article
  • First paragraph of lead could be split (probably best just before "As U.S. Attorney...")
  • First two sections could be merged into one titled 'Early life and military career' or even just 'Early life'
  • Well-written throughout
  • The later life subsection is appropriate in career, but since it's so short, it may fit better if included in a short intro paragraph of the whole Career section (above early career subsection header) - such an intro, with other chronological details, would in general be beneficial since the overall section is fairly extensive and well-divided.
  • Needs attention

Coverage

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  • Lead gives good overview
  • Sufficient info on early life
  • Career solidly comprehensive; good enough detail for GA, though I feel like more exists
  • Fair coverage of civic leadership; perhaps if quotes about his influence exist they could be added here
  • Very nice expansion on items in the Writings section
  • Personal life satisfactory
  • Pass - some ideas, though

Illustration

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  • Are there no images of him, a DA and State senator?
  • Good use of table at the bottom
  • Needs attention

Neutrality

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  • Good language throughout
  • Pass

Verifiability

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  • All sources look good
  • Everything cited
  • Pass

Stability

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  • Solid edit history
  • Pass
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  • Check looks good, mostly proper nouns flagged
  • No images
  • Pass

Overall

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  • Kingsif: Many thanks, very helpful. I've gone through and made some additional edits. I added some content to the "later life" section so I think the standalone section looks OK now. I tried to find a copyright-free image to add, but I haven't had any luck finding one. Neutralitytalk 02:56, 30 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]