Talk:White Water (pinball)
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Can any of these pinball terms be linked to other Wikipedia pages?Tuanniz (talk) 02:12, 2 May 2012 (UTC) The convention is usually to write the sentence-final punctuation before the quotation mark.Tuanniz (talk) 02:12, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
Links I think your page could be strengthened by integrating with the pinball pages that are already out there.Tuanniz (talk) 02:12, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
GameplayTuanniz (talk) 02:12, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
I think you should add a section called "gameplay," and collapse these descriptions (this will cause multiball, etc.) into that new section. In the rest of the article, you could focus on the history and development of the game.Tuanniz (talk) 02:12, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
- thanks for the advice on the grammar..... always my weak area as a teacher. I agree that I need to add some links, thanks. The gameplay section will come after the 'Overview' of the game, in which each section of the 'Overview' is broken down as to how to play that aspect of the game. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mattdimos (talk • contribs) 02:16, 2 May 2012 (UTC)