Talk:Whinchat/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 22:09, 16 October 2015 (UTC)

• Hi, I'll reivew this. FunkMonk (talk) 22:09, 16 October 2015 (UTC)
• This video is of much better quality than the one currently in the article: [1]

Replaced. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

• "The whinchat is a sort-tailed bird" Short I assume?

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

• "has blackish face mask" Missing a?

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

• "Its main call is a hue-tac-tac" Maybe add "is described as a"?

Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

• "to a maximum recorded of just over five years" Wild or captive?

Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:31, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

• With such a large range, I'd assume some subspecies are recognised or have been proposed?

Apparently not. Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:31, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

• Seems the supercilium could be mentioned in the intro?

Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

• "The whinchat is a solitary species" Only the intro states this.

Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

• Thank you for taking on this review.Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

Looks good, passed! FunkMonk (talk) 15:01, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

That was fast work, thanks indeed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:01, 17 October 2015 (UTC)