Talk:When I Grow Up (The Pussycat Dolls song)/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

2 deadlinks

Done Statυs (talk) 03:26, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Reality series

"the goal of the show was add a seventh member to the group." missing a word

Done Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Also this section has nothing to do with the song in any part, so its best to move it to the main page and remove it here.

It's in the background section for a reason. This all happened before they began recording their second album. Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I still see no reason to keep it here, it talks about the show not the song. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:07, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  Not done Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 14:55, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Background information is to what put happened before the song's creation into context. Adding a new member, and then them leaving is directly relevant to one of the reasons they took so long to release a new album. Statυs (talk) 22:44, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The section seems more suitable for the album, not the song. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 15:49, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  Can you remove this section to the main article so I can pass it? Best, Jona ^{talk to me} 15:51, 26 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I removed it 15 days ago... Statυs (talk) 02:27, 27 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Music and lyrics

"Lead vocalist Nicole Scherzinger was cited as adopting" we already know she is the lead vocalist, so her last name is only needed here.
Delink The Yardbirds

Done both Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Remixes

For unknown reasons, the remix was never released. source?

Why exactly does this need a source? The remix just wasn't released. Nothing was said about it since. Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Please fix the {{cn}} tags in this section

How would you suggest I source that statement? Could I just source the CD single/Digital releases that are present later in the article? Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 14:55, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done Statυs (talk) 22:44, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performance

at number seventy-six on the issue dated June 14, 2008 per WP:ORDINAL it would be 76, please apply elsewhere in this section.

Done what I could see. Statυs (talk) 03:10, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Please fix these before I go further. BTW sorry for the long wait. Best, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 02:54, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It's perfectly alright. Thank you for picking up the review!

Statυs (talk) 03:10, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Short break, lets begin

Music video

Delink Digital Spy
"Kimberly's signature move:" source?

Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

Delink MTV News
Delink 2008 MTV Movie Awards
Delink Los Angeles Times
Delink Walmart
""Buttons",= and" what?

Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Formats and track listings

Digital single source?
Digital EP source?

Done Statυs (talk) 00:07, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

FN#4 "Archived from %7C the original" needs fixing

I don't see what is making it do that. Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#8 publisherid?

The publisher ID is different on different versions of the album. By that I mean, it won't be the same on the US version as it would be on the European version. It's best to leave it out. Statυs (talk) 00:18, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#12 Hachette Fillapaachi Medias is a redlink remove link

Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#15 publisher?

Done Statυs (talk) 00:15, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#16 "Up for Discussion Jump to Forums." I never heard of this author before

Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#17 "MTV Networks]. " needs fixing

Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#18 do not shout also its The New York Times. Check other publishers for same

Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#25 publisher?

Doesn't appear to be one. Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#70 " "Video: Pussycat Dolls Perform on ‘So You Think You Can Dance&#8217"." needs fixing, also please compare to FN#58

Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#71 compare with FN#58

Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN#74 do not shout

Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Please fix these issues. Best, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:07, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for fixing, now passing. Best, Jona ^{talk to me} 12:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]