Talk:When Christmas Comes/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Eurofan88 (talk · contribs) 16:18, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Critical Reception -> reception
Chart performance -> Commercial performance would be better since the section also mentions the numbers of sales
Give a link to ABC in the lead and Music video section
Any comments about Legend's guest appearance in the critical reception?
- Couldn't really find much to be honest. Anything that's in the article is all I could find. — Calvin999 17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"It premiered on December 13, 2011" where? On a show? On her website? Also it's not stated when the video was uploaded to Carey's VEVO channel
- Same as above. — Calvin999 17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Why there's no reviews for the music video?
- Same as above. — Calvin999 17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Also who directed it?
- No one knows. — Calvin999 17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  - Rap-Up actually knows ;) [1] --Eurofan88 (talk) 18:08, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
    - Thanks, added. — Calvin999 18:18, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
      - Also the video features a cameo by Carey's husband Nick Cannon. You should add it too. --Eurofan88 (talk) 18:23, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
        Added. — Calvin999 18:51, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"The liner notes presented are for the original version included on the album."/"Credits adapted from the liner notes of Merry Christmas II You" it repeats the same thing two times, remove one of them from the section Credits and personnel
Wouldn't it be better if you add subsections in the Chart section? Like "Original version" and "Duet with John Legend"
- I don't think so, it's unnecessarily creating sub-sections. This is simpler. — Calvin999 17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Add category 2011 singles
Add the temaplate of John Legend under Carey's template in the article
No link to her solo version in the External links?
- Her verified account doesn't have an audio sample. Typically only link to a music video or lyric video. — Calvin999 17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Romove the "which Amy Sciarretto of PopCrush described as a demonstration of their "creative and collaborative chemistry"" part from picture in the Promotion section. It's already mentioned within the section.
- No because it gives the image rationale and describes why the picture is included. — Calvin999 19:19, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm placing it on hold. Also i would be thankful with you if you write a review for Wallace (song) nominated by me and Azealia911. Best wishes! --Eurofan88 (talk) 16:18, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing. I'm reluctant to review Wallace (song) because it's canvassing and I don't want an admin to slap my wrist for doing it. Asking people to review a nomination is discouraged. — Calvin999 17:38, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Suport! Everything looks okay now, i don't have any comments anymore as you answered them all. --Eurofan88 (talk) 19:25, 15 August 2015 (UTC) Thank you — Calvin999 19:27, 15 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]