Talk:Westlife/GA2
GA Failed
[edit]This article is on reviewRealist2 (talk) 06:24, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
Im afraid this article fails for the following reasons.
- Poorly written, the lead is shocking
- To many album and CD covers, they should be on their own respective pages, they dont even have captions.
- Everything is split into mini line paragraphs. It needs to all be joined together smoothly.
- RED links
- Not broad enough, the section on mcfadden leaving is like three lines long.
- Headings are not formatted properly. No need for a capital letter for every new word.
- There is a citation tag in the heading for world record, WHY!!!!!!!!!!
- Get all spelling, grammar and pros sorted.
Dont renominate it until that point. Realist2 (talk) 06:38, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
- Some of my comments have still not been addressed, re the links to copyright violations, and excessive use of CD covers. For instance, the "Flying Without Wings" cover has no right to be located where it is as that section isn't even talking about the song, never mind giving a critical commentary. When justifying 'non-free images', ask "can the text be understood just as well without this image?" In most cases on this page, the images do not enhance understanding; they mainly make it look pretty. The JPStalk to me 09:33, 11 April 2008 (UTC)