Talk:Weronika Rosati/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:10, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:10, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Here, and in #Acting_career, Inland Empire should link to Inland Empire (film).

 Done

• Add a comma after "Last Vegas (2013)".

 Done

• "Aside acting" → "Aside from acting"

 Done

Life and career

Early life and education

• Remove the comma after "Warsaw Ochota Theatre".

 Done

• "trained dancing" → "trained in dancing"

 Done

• "taka" → "take"

 Done

• Add a comma after "Larry Moss Studio".

 Done

Acting career

• Add a comma after "panned by critics".

 Done

• "Polish actors successful" → "successful Polish actors"

 Done

• The phrase "international scene" doesn't sound right, so try rewording.

 Done

• "guest starred" → "guest-starred"

 Done

• "and the 1940s" → "and 1940s"

 Done

Personal life and non-acting work

• "to leg injury" → "to a leg injury"

 Done

• Remove the comma after "unable to walk".

 Done

• "and a continual" → "and continual"

 Done

• "in relationship" → "in a relationship"

 Done

• "list of 100" → "list of the 100"

 Done

• "of Polish" → "of the Polish"

 Done

• "guest hosted" → "guest-hosted"

 Done

Filmography

• This section looks good.

References

• For the cite bundle after "respectively", add bullet points before each source.

 Done

• Sources are already archived.
• Websites are also linked.

@Some Dude From North Carolina: All done. Thanks so much for your review. ArturSik (talk) 19:39, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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