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Good articleWeinen, Klagen, Sorgen, Zagen, BWV 12 has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
August 16, 2014Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 29, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that in the 1714 Bach cantata Weinen, Klagen, Sorgen, Zagen, BWV 12, the first choral section was described as a "tombeau ... most impressive and deeply affecting"?


GA Review

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 16:44, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]


Will review within the next three days :-)♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:44, 11 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox
It's intentionally to the redirect, because some day thatcould become an article.
Lead
  • A lot of italics. It is really necessary to italicize positions like Konzertmeister and Thomaskantor?
Copied from FA BWV 172, that's my model.
History
  • " The text of the opening chorus corresponds to John 16:20, the text of the first recitative is taken from Acts 14:22, "we must through much tribulation enter into the kingdom of God". = "The text of the opening chorus corresponds to John 16:20, and the text of the first recitative, "we must through much tribulation enter into the kingdom of God", is taken from Acts 14:22."
taken
Music

A lot of very short paragraphs and quite a lot of short, snappy sentences. Can you merge a few?

This still reads as a bit rough around the edges in parts. Could use a copyedit for clarity and some tidying up in parts but in terms of content looks adequate for GA.♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:08, 13 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Will do, but make a few days. rather busy today and tomorrow, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:57, 13 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
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  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
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    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
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  7. Overall:
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Good job Gerda, looks fine for GA now!♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:51, 16 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]