Talk:Wedding industry in the United States/Archives/2014

Further suggestions

• Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
• Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles. Starting with the lead, there are sections in desperate need of links.
• Images should have concise captions.
• Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
• This article does not have any categories. Please categorize it with relevant [[Category:Categories]].
• Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
• Avoid contractions, such as aren't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
  • Fixed as of 3/4/2014 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.2.87.198 (talk) 22:38, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
• As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]^[?]

_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk} 23:46, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

• The first reference link is dead Seaneseor (talk) 15:22, 6 January 2014 (UTC)