Talk:Wear My Kiss/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 19:09, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Initial review

• 2 disambiguation pages
  • Fixed. Till
• 1 access issue, 1 connection issue
  • I don't understand :S I could access it. Till

Lead / Infobox

• I decided to just make the changes here myself. There wasn't many.
  • Thanks. Till

Background

• No comma needed before album title.
  • Fixed. Till
• These producers included Stargate, RedOne and personnel from Jay-Z's label, Roc Nation, which they had signed to in April 2009 --> These producers included Stargate, RedOne and personnel from Jay-Z's record label Roc Nation, which they signed a record deal with in April 2009.
  • Fixed. Till
• under their real names --> Not needed.
  • Fixed. I don't know why I put that there lol. Till
• How about some more background information? Surely there should be information about Keisha being kicked out of the group. The song was originally recorded with her, and the new one re-recorded her vocals, right?
  • Done Till
• No need for comma after date.
  • Which comma? Till

Composition

• For is not needed before three minutes.
  • Done. Till
• Sample is too long. It should be around 22 seconds.
  • I don't know how to upload them though. Someone else did it for me. Till

Reception

• "very now, very radio-friendly" --> radio friendly is fine.
  • Done. Till
• than the group's previous two singles; "Get Sexy" and "About a Girl". --> colon
  • Done. Till
• He elaborated, "There's something depressing about a pop song which wears the formula for great pop songs quite as transparently as this does." --> Colon, not comma. And period outside quotation marks.
  • Done. Till
• Sweet 7 also became the first Sugababes album since Taller in More Ways (2005) to contain three top ten singles. --> Source for this information?
  • Done. Till

Promotion

• Went and fixed these issues myself as well.
  • Ty. Till

References

• References should be in British English format (e.g. 1 January 2012).
  • Rlly? All the Sugababes articles use 2012-01-01. Till
    • The dates are in British English are they not? It's the same thing. Statυs (talk) 01:46, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
      • I will fix this issue, and for No Can Do, for which the nominator addressed. Till

• The article contains 1 Uncategorized redirect

Second lookthrough

• I will give a second lookthrough of the article once the reference dates are all formatted correctly.
  • Okay thanks. I will fix them later today, I had a 2000 word report to do yesterday. Till
    • Dang, that's crazy. Take as much time as you need. Statυs (talk) 10:50, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
      • Okay all done with the dates, and I fixed the titles too. Till

• Ref 32 and 33 do not support the information it states. One is an archive of this year, and the other directs to some other artist.
  • Fixed both. Till
    • Great. Everything else seems to be in order. I am passing the article. Great work! Statυs (talk) 02:05, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
      • Thankyou, Status. Till 02:35, 19 June 2012 (UTC)