Talk:Water (Kanye West song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Hey Kyle Peake, I will start my review now. LOVI33 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

• Remove wikilink to Kanye West under songwriters WP:OVERLINK
• Per Template:Infobox song, only lead producers should be credited in the infobox, therefore remove, Angel Lopez, Vindver and Timbaland

 Done for the above even though I had already set these credits properly before this edit switched things around --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

• "Clemons and West had a conversation about Jesus, which the song came from" → "The song came from a conversation between Clemons and West about Jesus"

 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Background and recording

• First paragraph is really long, maybe split it up into a few?

 Done how's that look? --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

• [sic] → [sic], using Template:Sic

 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

• Looks Good!

Release and promotion

• No problems found, looks good!

Critical reception

• Looks good!

Commercial performance

• "entered at number 51 on the US Billboard Hot 100" → "entered the US Billboard Hot 100 at number 51"
• "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the Hot 100" → "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the chart"

 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• Change title to just "Personnel," "Credits and personnel" is used when there are recording locations involved

Are you sure about this? I was thinking that stuff like "recording engineer", "associated performer" and "mastering engineer" makes it titled as of current? --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Okay fair enough, Keep it as is. LOVI33 13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Charts

• Looks good!

Notes

• Looks good!

References

• ref 1 is a bare url, replace with a citation

 Not done I instead removed since it was added in the recent edit that changed the infobox --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

External links

• Looks good!

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold for now. Just a few small changes and I will promote it to GA. Amazing work on the article by the way. LOVI33 04:06, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

  LOVI33 Have made proper fixes for the changes apart from that one. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

  Kyle Peake, Okay thats a ✓ Pass. LOVI33 13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC)