Talk:Watch (Billie Eilish song)

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Review: August 19, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Watch (Billie Eilish song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 15:23, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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Because of your work on "Homesick", I will take this on! LOVI 33 15:23, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Cover art need alt text
Remove format from infobox, that parameter is now defunct
"it was released through" → "the song was released for digital download and streaming through", with appropriate targets
"as the EP's third single" → "as the third single from the EP"
Target ballad to itself

Not done The song is about breakup, therefore it's a sentimental ballad. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 01:03, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"The song was ultimately certified platinum" → "The song received platinum certifications"
"In it" → "In the visual"

Done

Background and composition

"When Eilish and Finneas were recording the song, the track title was titled "Watch & Burn". The track later became two separate songs. One being "Watch" and the other being "&Burn"" → "The song was originally titled "Watch & Burn", before becoming two separate tracks, one being "Watch" and the other being "&Burn", a collaboration with Vince Staples"
"According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com" → "According to sheet music published by Hal Leonard Music Publishing at Musicnotes.com"
"80-84" → "80–84"
"of C Major. Eilish's vocals span a range of G3 to C₅" → "of C Major, while Eilish's vocals range from G₃ to C₅"
"Critical commentary described "Watch" as a pop ballad" → "The song was described as a pop ballad by music critics"
Target ballad to itself instead of Sentimental ballad

Not done per above.

"[8][7]", refs need to be in numerical order
Target chorus to Refrain
"Eilish croons that her former lover has changed" → "Eilish croons about her former lover changing", also, this doesn't seem to backed up by a ref, am I missing something?

LOVI33, it's supported by two reliable sources: "Vice" and "Atwood Magazine".

"[8][4][7]", refs need to be in numerical order

Done

Reception

Remove target on music critics
"number 22 on their" → "number 22 on the website's"
"Every Billie Eilish song, ranked" → ""Every Billie Eilish song, ranked""
"Willen saying" → "with Willen writing"
Target Vice to Vice (magazine)
"described the song's chorus" → "described the chorus"
"most notably being certified platinum" → "including platinum certifications"

Done

Promotion

"An official music video was released on September 18, 2017, directed by actress Megan Park" → "A music video for "Watch" was released on September 18, 2017 and directed by Canadian actress Megan Park"
"The singer stated in an interview with Vice, Eilish states Park came up with Eilish" → "The singer stated in an interview with Vice that Park came up with her"
"I walk over to the other "ladder"." → "I walk over to the other 'ladder,'", per MOS:QWQ
"old me like, "Screw you, I'm going to light you on fire now."" → "old me like, 'Screw you, I'm going to light you on fire now.'", per MOS:QWQ
""Watch" was also included" → "It was also included"

Done

Credits and personnel

Target liner notes to itself
use {{spaced ndash}} to have the right space between credits and personnel
Remove targets on Eilish and Finneas per MOS:OVERLINK

Done

Charts

Remove year-end subtitle since there is only one type of chart
MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: 2019 year-end chart positions for "Watch"
Target AFP to Associação Fonográfica Portuguesa

Done

Certifications

MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Certifications and sales for "Watch"

Done

Release history

Again, MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Release dates and formats for "Watch"
"Format" → "Format(s)"

Done

References

Copyvio score needs work at 66.2%, check your wording of ref 8. It seems as though the lyrical analysis is interfering with lyric website Genius, maybe remove some of it.

It is now around 39%, which is good! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 01:49, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Make sure all these are archived
Archive date is after accessdate on ref 3 and 6, just put today's date for accessdate
Ref 9: remove Pitchfork from title, cite Pitchfork as work or website, cite YouTube as via with target, cite Apr 22, 2020 as date.
Target NME to itself on ref 13
Ref 15: cite YouTube as via, plus add the date it was published

Not done for citing Youtube again because it already is for ref 9.

Done

Final comments and verdict

Sorry the review took so long. On hold until issues are fixed. Excited to see your comments on "IDGAF"! LOVI 33 22:04, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33, no worries! Lmk if anything else needs to be fixed. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 01:50, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hey The Ultimate Boss, I think you were kind of confused with some of the ref improvements I was suggesting so I have gone ahead a fixed them for you here. Unfortunately, I can't pass this yet. For one, You need a source that calls "Watch" a sentimental ballad, you cannot just assume. The source you have given just simply calls it a ballad. Also, I reviewed every source you gave for Eilish singing about her lover changing in the chorus and maybe I'm missing something, but I have reviewed every source (Atwood, Insider, and Vice) you gave, and all just talk about it's lyrics. If I'm missing something could you quote it? LOVI 33 13:19, 15 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

LOVI33, Okay, I have changed it to what you have requested. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 02:34, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great! I'm ready to ✓ Pass this. LOVI 33 14:43, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]