Talk:Washington State Route 532/GA1
GA Review
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Comments:
- The sentence "The 10.09-mile (16.24 km) long roadway begins at Sunrise Boulevard in Camano and travels east to Stanwood and ends at an interchange with Interstate 5 (I-5)." sounds wordy.
- Remove Secondary State Highway 1Y links in lead and history that redirect to this article and bold instance in lead.
- The sentence "The route intersects city streets, crosses a railroad track owned by the BNSF Railway, and serves Amtrak's Cascades route between Vancouver, British Columbia, and Seattle." sounds awkward.
- Shouldn't the information about the traffic counts near the western terminus be mentioned earlier in the route description?
- Can more information about the physical surroundings the route passes through (i.e. woods, residential areas) be added to the route description?
- Much of the history section contains minor construction projects. Can you remove any projects that are not notable?
I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 14:54, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
Done –CG 17:33, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
- I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 23:23, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
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