Talk:Washington State Route 529/GA1

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The sentence "The 7.88-mile (12.68 km) long roadway extends north from an interchange with Interstate 5 (I-5), numbered exit 193, past the western terminus of U.S. Route 2 (US 2), its spur route, Downtown Everett and Naval Station Everett to cross the Snohomish River and the Steamboat Slough to interchange with I-5, numbered exit 198, before crossing the Ebey Slough and entering Marysville to end at SR 528." is wordy and needs to be split.
I don't think traffic counts from 1980 are accurate in the route description.
Do not use "then" in describing progression of route.
"and intersecting various streets": intersecting should be intersects.
"the older alignment of the roadway and US 99 and Marine View Drive" sounds awkward.
"part of the Delta neighborhood of Everett, named after the delta of the Snohomish River located to the southwest": remove comma after Everett and add "that is" in its place.
underpass redirects to tunnel and I do not think it is relevant in that context.
The sentence "Between 2005 and 2008, exit 192 on I-5 was reconstructed and a new flyover ramp from I-5 northbound to Broadway northbound was added and the 41st Street interchange was transformed into a single-point urban interchange." is wordy.
The sentence "State Road 1 was replaced by Primary State Highway 1 (PSH 1) in the Primary state highways, created in 1937." sounds awkward.
Democratic Party needs to be disambiguated to Democratic Party (United States)
Template:Shban should be added for SR 529 Spur in the Spur route section.

I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 17:02, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

All Done –CG 14:50, 28 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 21:49, 28 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]