Talk:Washington State Route 203/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Truflip99 (talk · contribs) 08:50, 12 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Last sentence sounds a little awkward. Try: SR 203 was included as part of the proposed Interstate 605
- Fixed and split.

Route desc

... on a steel truss bridge and entering Monroe
- Fixed.
... before it terminates at an intersection with US 2
- I'd rather keep the terminating subject clear, as "the highway" could be read as the physical road.
Main Street continues north as Chain Lake Road...
- Fixed.
Vast stretches of SR 203 was built as a rural, shoulder-less highway consisting of two lanes with speed limits between 50 to 55 miles per hour (80 to 89 km/h) outside of city centers.
- I don't see how this makes any more sense.
  - @SounderBruce: I would still find a way to reword it, as it doesn't sound right with "Most" starting it off. "SR 203 is largely/mostly a rural..."
based on the citation, I would word the last sentence as: ... and often closes for several days each year.
- Fixed.

--Truflip99 (talk) 08:50, 12 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Truflip99: Thanks for picking this one up for review. Just for future reference, you should mention the existing text to be fixed, followed by corrections using {{tq}}. It makes it easier to figure out (via browser search), especially in a long list of revisions. Sounder Bruce 00:30, 13 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

History

Second sentence: The initial road was built on the west side of the valley in the 1870s and was paralleled
- "to the east by a new road on the east side" -- this sounds a bit redundant
- Fixed.
2nd paragraph, 1st sent: The northernmost section of the road, along Lewis Street in Monroe
- Done.
2nd p, 1st sent: while the rest of the highway was described as
- Not necessary, as "highway" is mentioned shortly before.
"The final paving projects were approved in 1945 and completed over the next three years." (sounds more appropriate/common/rolls off the tongue)
- Done.
Lewis Steel Bridge replacement -- when?
- Yearadded.
... constructing the freeway, which would have traveled from southern King County... The study determined that through-travelers would have only saved five minutes... ... determined that a highway built north of Snoqualmie would not have been economically feasible and failed to sufficiently...
- I have to disagree with some uses of past tense in the last sentence, as the study was relatively recent and projected towards the 2020s and 2030s.
Last p, 2nd sent: "unsignalized" I don't think should have a dash in American English?
- Removed.
WSDOT completed the construction of a second roundabout...
- Not necessary.
last sentence: change a populated area to plural form
- Done.

--Truflip99 (talk) 17:11, 16 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Truflip99: All done with these. Sounder Bruce 21:51, 16 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am satisfied with the final read through. Passing. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:13, 18 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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