Talk:Washington State Route 142/GA1
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Reviewer: Rschen7754 (talk · contribs) 22:06, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
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- The railroad was completed in April 1903, via a route along the Klickitat River Canyon to Wahkiacus and Swale Creek to the southern outskirts of Goldendale. - with the repeated "to" construction the sentence is less clear.
- Fixed by adding "before reaching"
- incorporated into a branch of a major railroad - do we know which one? Also, the repeated "railroad" in this sentence makes it more confusing.
- The sentence meant to say that the Lyle branch was supplementary to the northern bank railroad (which was the mainline of the SP&S Company). I have reworded it to make it clearer.
- shorter and longer bridges - could use a bit more explanation
- Added descriptors (west and east).
Couldn't find any other issues. Should be a pass once these issues are fixed. --Rschen7754 22:38, 14 September 2019 (UTC)
- @Rschen7754: Thanks for the review. I have fixed all three issues that were raised. SounderBruce 03:46, 15 September 2019 (UTC)