Talk:War College (Sweden)

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English translation

The sources provided here are all in Swedish so I just wanted to verify the basis for the English name. Is there any source for this? Peter ^Isotalo 16:46, 9 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I was a bit uncertain about the translation, whether I should use 'Krigskollegium' or 'War College.' I haven't found 'War College' in any dictionaries; however, 'War College' appears as the translation of 'Krigskollegium' in the following books/journals/theses: /Saftgurka (talk) 14:07, 10 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I wasn't really doubtful about the translation, but I just wanted to make sure. Sometimes even obvious translations aren't actually published in reliable sources. Or they sometimes disagree. But this looks perfectly solid. I don't see a specific need to footnote the English name, but if you can include an English source that uses the term, it would be a nice improvement. Peter ^Isotalo 14:17, 10 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Petersson, Erik (2014). "Wounded Veterans and the State: The precursor of the veteran's home in Sweden (1560–1650)" (PDF). Scandinavian Journal of History. 39:2, 185–197: 9. ISSN 0346-8755. 0346-8755.
Petersson, Erik (2017). Vadstena krigsmanshus: en studie av den svenska kronans inrättning för sårade och gamla soldater cirka 1640–1780 (PDF). Linköping studies in arts and science, 0282-9800 ; 663 (in Swedish). Linköping: Institutionen för studier av samhällsutveckling och kultur (ISAK), Linköpings universitet. p. 200. ISBN 9789176859094. LIBRIS: 21893024.
Sundberg, Ulf (2018). Swedish defensive fortress warfare in the Great Northern War 1702-1710 (PDF). Åbo: Åbo Akademi University Press. pp. xii, 22, 32. ISBN 9789517658973. LIBRIS: hrfz10smff8hvdp4.
Kaiserfeld, Thomas (2009). Krigets salt: salpetersjudning som politik och vetenskap i den svenska skattemilitära staten under frihetstid och gustaviansk tid (PDF). Stockholm papers in history and philosophy of technology, 0349-2842Trita-HOT, 0348-4696 ; 2061 (in Swedish). Lund: Sekel. pp. 261, 264. ISBN 9789185767427. LIBRIS: 11678113.
Talbott, Siobhan (2007). Scottish Women and the Scandinavian Wars of the Seventeenth Century (PDF). Vol. 40. p. 111.

Lead

The lead starts out a bit too indirect and is a bit hard to follow. For starters, I recommend starting out with a simple "X is Y" sentence and how long it was around. The history, founding and all that will follow more naturally after establishing the article topic for the reader. Peter ^Isotalo 14:21, 10 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]