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B class review

B class. But please fix the following issues. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 02:38, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

He served in the Middle East and suddenly he is on the Western Front. I found this confusing. Presumably he made the transfer when he joined Jagdstaffel 18. Please mention the change of theater.
His brother Harry is listed in the infobox, but he is not mentioned in the body of the article. Please add this information.
When I see a one-sentence introduction, this says to me: "Not B class". Please expand by adding at least two sentences. (Hints: Scored victories in Mid-East and Western Front. Commanded 2 squadrons. Earned Pour le Merite.)
- All remedied.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:48, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]