Talk:Walden–Wallkill Rail Trail/GA1
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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 02:48, 7 January 2011 (UTC) No disamb links or bad links.
I will be reviewing your article. It clearly represents a lot of work.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- "The park is expected to be built once" ->"The park is expected to be developed once"
- "Congressman Maurice Hinchey announced the procurement of $351,000 to complete the project"->"Congressman Maurice Hinchey announced the appropriation of $351,000 to complete the project"
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- Do you have a source for the fact that the trial is no longer named after Jesse McHugh?
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Explain who Jesse McHugh was in the lead. It is too burried now.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- no edit wars.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Nice photos. Thank you for contributing them.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Placing article on hold.
- Pass/Fail:
Changes
I don't have a source that it's no longer named after Jesse McHugh, so tweaking the wording slightly. All other changes have been completed.
--Gyrobo (talk) 04:35, 7 January 2011 (UTC)
Congratulations. Racepacket (talk) 06:38, 7 January 2011 (UTC)