Talk:Wake Up Call (KSI song)/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
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Got a few GANs on hold but that is only because users haven't finished their responses yet, so I'll review this. --K. Peake 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Done
- "finally accepting KSI's success." → "finally accepting his success."
- Done
- "and it reached" → "and it further reached"
- Done
- "Netherlands and New Zealand." → "the Netherlands and New Zealand."
- Done
- Remove wikilink on costume
- Done
Background
[edit]- Why isn't this or a similar section at the start of the article's body?
- Done
Music and lyrics
[edit]- Verse–chorus form and the length are both unsourced
- Not done you have still kept this --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
- There is information from 4 and 16 about the music and vocals that can easily be added here; take the chorus, synths and bass for example
- Done
- "KSI continued," → "He continued,"
- Done
Release and promotion
[edit]- "revealing the song's title as" → "revealing the title as"
- Done
- Not done you should implement the above version, not an altered one --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
- Done
- "debut studio album, Dissimulation (2020)." → "debut studio album Dissimulation (2020)."
- Done
- Partly done remove the comma --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
- Done
- Wikilink YouTube
- Done
- Done
- The replacement and verses info is not sourced; only the release and features are
- Done
Critical reception
[edit]- Remove target on synth
- Done
- Remove target on bass
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- Remove target on instrumentation
- Done
- "Dominiq remarked that" → "He remarked that"
- Done
- "this current generation."" → "this current generation"." per MOS:QUOTE
- Done
Music video
[edit]- Wikilink music video
- Done
- "by Nayip Ramos.[19] The music video was" → "by Nayip Ramos and was" since the two sentences are too short to be separate, plus [19] should solely be at the end of the sentence
- Done
- "The music video was released" → "The video was released"
- Done
- Not done --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
- Done
- "The video stars both artists and" → "The video stars KSI and Trippie Redd alongside"
- Done
- Where is the dance troupe mentioned?
- Not done it is still there but unsourced
- Remove wikilink on costumes
- Done
- Remove target on behind-the-scenes footage
- Done
- Not done --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
- Done
- "Speaking about the costumes" → "Discussing the costumes"
- Done
- ""[It was] one" → ""[It was o]ne"
- Done
Commercial performance
[edit]- "was the country's second-most" → "was the second-most"
- Done
- The number of weeks it spent on the second chart is not mentioned, so just change to writing about the number seven debut
- Done
- The Hungary and Netherlands positions are top 30, so should be mentioned in the prose
- Done
- "In Australia, the song" → "Elsewhere, in Australia, the song" since that is a different continent
- Done
- Is Billboard really needed in the title of the Canadian chart just because the magazine publishes it?
- Done
Live performance
[edit]- Move the live performance to Release and promotion, as this is only one para
- Done
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Songwriter should come before vocals in the credits order
- Done
Charts
[edit]- Are you sure the Australia Hip Hop/R&B chart is notable?
- Done
Release history
[edit]- Good
See also
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Copyvio score is too high for the Tone Deaf ref; cut down the level of quoting to fix this
- Done
- Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
- Done
- Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 2
- Done
- Cite Vice as work/website instead for ref 5
- Done
- Fix MOS:CAPS issues with refs 9 and 25
- Done
- Cite GRM Daily as publisher instead for refs 10, 15 and 18, plus only keep the wikilink for 10
- Done
- Partly done it has not been changed to publisher --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
- Done
- Cite TikTok as publisher instead for ref 13 and remove it from the title
- Done
- Remove or replace refs 22 and 40 per WP:RSP
- Not done this is about the unreliable Metro refs --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
- Cite auspOp as publisher instead for ref 36
- Done
External links
[edit]- Good
Final comments and verdict
[edit]- On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but a problem I noticed that is common with your articles is that you did not expand the music and lyrics even when the sources have sufficient info to do so. --K. Peake 09:21, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
- Timwikisidemen I have gone over where you have missed some things above. --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
- Timwikisidemen You still need to remove the Metro refs and if there aren't any other sources for the info they provide, then delete that. --K. Peake 15:59, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
- Timwikisidemen Any plans to follow through with the above soon? --K. Peake 17:03, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
- Timwikisidemen Thank you for removing the bad source; you had left some info there that was not backed up by the other refs but I deleted that since it was merely one sentence and an adjective. ✓ Pass now, took a little longer than usual but to your avail evidently! --K. Peake 18:49, 14 February 2021 (UTC)