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GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:22, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox

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  • Please add an alt to the single cover image
  • You can remove the caption altogether
  • The release date for the next single "For You" is in 2000, not 1999
  • Shoutout! The song was recorded in one of the towns I used to live in :) :)

Lead

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  • I don't know if the "translated to Wait & See ~Risk~" is necessary since the name of the article is "Wait & See (Risk)", which is already translated, so you can remove it

Paragraph 2

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  • "both on" flip to "on both" please
  • Add the years to the tours you mentioned in the final statement

Background and composition

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  • Add 2001 in parentheses to Distance in the second to final sentence in this paragraph

Paragraph 2

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  • "track's" --> "tracks"
  • Change to "... on her 2007 singles "Kiss & Cry"/"Beautiful World".[5]"; then remember to link both songs individually since they each have their own respective articles
  • Reword the last sentence to this please: "When a staff editor from CD Journal reviewed Utada's first greatest hits album, Utada Hikaru Single Collection Vol. 1 (2004), he labeled the composition as "urban" and "speedy".[9]"
  • Again, add the year (2004) to Utada Hikaru Single Collection Vol. 1 please

Critical reception

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  • You already linked and described Utada Hikaru Single Collection Vol. 1 so unlink it and remove "Utada's first greatest hits compilation" from the sentence
  • I might move the CD Journal review towards the end of this paragraph since its initial review sounds a bit more "mixed" to me
  • What does the Yahoo! reviewer mean when he says the single was "comfortable"? Can you elaborate?

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  • Remove "associate professor of biological sciences and" from from the lead statement please
  • Rest looks good

Commercial response

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  • Remove either "opening" or "first" from the third single as they potentially mean the same exact thing

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  • The 'b' in 'b-side' should be capitalized
  • After that, nothing else to add

Music video

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  • "Intercut" is one word
  • No sources for the description of the video so far

Paragraph 2

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  • Put "behind the scenes" in quotation marks like I just did please

Live performances and promotion

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  • Add "a" before "Utada's concert tours."
  • Capitalize the 't' in 'Bohemian Summer tour' please

Track listings and formats

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  • De-capitalize the 's' in "DVD Single" please
  • Rest is great

Credits and personnel

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  • You can add where the song was recorded here

Chart and certifications

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Weekly charts

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  • Same comments as in previous reviews: Put the "yearly" chart in a separate "year-end" column please

End of GA Review:

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Really, really good article actually! On hold for seven days, wisely-worded @CaliforniaDreamsFan! Good luck!! Carbrera (talk) 04:33, 4 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Carbrera: All done CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 23:49, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@CaliforniaDreamsFan: Thanks! I just so happened to be checking on the status of this article :) Carbrera (talk) 23:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]