Talk:WNOL-TV/GA1
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 05:14, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Yo! I will (ideally) be able to review this within one week. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:14, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good! Pass. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 21:06, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
Copyvio check
[edit]Earwig says good to go.
File(s)
[edit]All images used are relevant, of acceptable quality and copyright-free.
Prose
[edit](Lead is good)
- Wikilink New Orleans.
- Can I be a pedant and recommend "38 for comparative hearing—Oak Television of New Orleans,"? I have not seen from used in this context before.
- Reworded differently.
- "additional capital, the firm added 100 additional partners" – recommend rephrasing to avoid a repetition of additional.
- Just curious, what is "(Hal)" referring to?
- Hal is a bit of an old-fashioned nickname for Harold. He was usually known as Hal Protter.
- Wikilink WGNO.
- I would wikilink reruns, since it is not really a term commonly used anymore.
- "After the newspaper printed the "piranhas" quote" – how about "In response to the "piranhas" quote"?
- Leaving this here because the newspaper's handling was up for question in the articles at the time
- Ah, I see!
- Leaving this here because the newspaper's handling was up for question in the articles at the time
- "goods and services, not cash" – how about "goods and services instead of cash"? Ignore this suggestion if this is standard AM ENG however.
- The sentence starting "While WNOL-TV had a strong 1984 …" is honestly a bit awkward.
- "power to box WNOL-TV" – sorry, again not familiar with American English, is 'box' really formal?
- "and WNOL-TV became the local affiliate of the new Fox …" reads awkwardly because of "and because" in the previous sentence.
- "even before Black Monday" – it is wikilinked but how about "even before the Black Monday stock market crash" to save readers some effort?
- How about "joint venture with Quincy Jones Entertainment Company".
- That's the name of the JV.
- My bad!
- That's the name of the JV.
- Wikilink prime time.
- Rephrase "the door was open" for formality.
- Wikilink WVUE to WVUE-DT.
- "seeking the ABC affiliation" – wikilink ABC.
- "In a September 18 article" – is there a reason you are noting this?
- Yes, because of the mention of early September meetings. It was a full year before the affiliation was already announced.
- "Canal Street offices to 23,000 square feet (2,100 m2)" – this is worded weirdly.
- You could wikilink duopolies.
- "and with a small alligator found stuck in a fence" - I do not think this is really noteworthy.
- I use it here to indicate how bad the damage was. Added "fish", as in the source, because fish stuck in a fence might indicate some of the flooding.
- Looks good.
- I use it here to indicate how bad the damage was. Added "fish", as in the source, because fish stuck in a fence might indicate some of the flooding.
- Wikilink the CW.
Refs
[edit]Passes spotcheck on refs 7, 15, 22, 27, 37, 46 and 65.
- For ref 68, I cannot seem to find where it mentions June 2007.
- Fixed this by adding a new supporting reference. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 19:10, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
- @LunaEatsTuna, everything should be handled. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 19:33, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
Others
[edit]- Rec template:use American English (but optional)
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