Talk:Władysław Raginis/GA1

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:36, 12 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:36, 12 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

There's a few disambiguation pages that likely need to point to the correct articles: see here.

DONE Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ref #26 (fakty-po-faktach (is a deadlink).

FIXED Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ref #23 needs a publisher.

FIXED Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Since this is an article on a European, I'm pretty sure dates should be in dmy format.

I'm not...I don't see that as a GA-Level requirement. It is like asking that it be "Centre" vs "Center" Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Either way, at least make them consistent, since you use both and the dates should at least be uniform per MoS. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 01:26, 18 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed the errant reference date. Ajh1492 (talk) 02:17, 18 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"He came from a landowning family with patriotic traditions." could this be made more specific? i.e. what sorts of traditions?

"Patriotic" was the work used in the primary source, no additional details provided. Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"In anticipation of the outbreak of the Second World War in 1939," since you give the date later, in 1939 can be removed.

DONE Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"It is worth noting that the construction of shelters not finally completed as war broke out, some of the shelters, there was no ventilation, many of them masked and some were not fitted with armored domes, such as shelter commander, which significantly reduced the combat capability of the emplacements." This sentence needs a complete rewrite, very confusing as written and seemingly missing a couple words or having the wrong ones.

FIXED Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"Lieutenant (Stanisław Brykalski) by" parentheses not needed.

FIXED Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Not too many things to fix. I'll put the article on hold for a week and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:45, 15 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I think I have the points covered. Ajh1492 (talk) 20:34, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I went ahead and fixed the final couple date issues, and since I see no other concerns, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:35, 18 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]