Talk:Virtual Theatre/GA1
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Reviewer: Czarkoff (talk · contribs) 10:31, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. |
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3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | ||
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | ||
7. Overall assessment. |
Discussion
[edit]Hi! I merged the "Games" section into Development, in this style: "Lure of the Temptress, released in 1992 for Amiga, Atari ST and PC..." etc. I have split the "Development" section into "Development" and "Features." :) --Khanassassin ☪ 12:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
- Let me handle the table, please. I'll do the proper prose and MOS checks once the split is complete and no duplicate statements would be found in the sections. — Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 16:49, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
- Oh, ok. Just one thing, do You really think the miage in the infobox should be so small? Just saying... :) --Khanassassin ☪ 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
- IMHO pixelization is a problem much more severe then that of size. This image is too low quality (I mean the technical aspect) to be upscaled. – Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 11:32, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- I think I've removed all the duplicate sentences... but, You said You'll handle the table, so You'll judge if I'm done or not... :) --Khanassassin ☪ 17:41, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
- OK to me. — Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 11:32, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- Oh, ok. Just one thing, do You really think the miage in the infobox should be so small? Just saying... :) --Khanassassin ☪ 17:34, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
What "solid" means, is that..well..it's solid. So, because it's solid, unlike in most adventure games (where objects were transparent), the player character couldn't walk straight through the non-playable character. I think this is not really an issue... :) - If this is not good, could you fix it yourself (since you kind of know what "solid" stands for now) :) --Khanassassin ☪ 13:02, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- Check it out. Does it look good now? :) --Khanassassin ☪ 13:10, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- Solid means "made from a single piece", transparent – "you can see through it". The typical glass is solid and transparent. These words describe different properties and can't be used to oppose each other, specifically in game interface engine. — Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 13:29, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- Does this change correctly explain the property in question? — Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 13:37, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, it's better --Khanassassin ☪ 13:40, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- I added the authors. But, the YouTube videos are actually official TEDx YouTube videos, which is considered a reliable source. :) --Khanassassin ☪ 13:52, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, it's better --Khanassassin ☪ 13:40, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- Does this change correctly explain the property in question? — Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 13:37, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- Solid means "made from a single piece", transparent – "you can see through it". The typical glass is solid and transparent. These words describe different properties and can't be used to oppose each other, specifically in game interface engine. — Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 13:29, 2 April 2012 (UTC)