Talk:Virgin Islands at the 2014 Winter Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:36, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- "excepting the" Change to "except the."
- "The USVI had their only athlete at the 2006 Winter Olympics break her wrist in training," Who?
- "making Sochi the sixth time athletes had actually competed in the Winter Olympics for the USVI." I think this could be shortened.
- "Alpine skier Jasmine Campbell was the only athlete the USVI sent to Sochi. Campbell was selected as the flag bearer for both the opening ceremony and closing ceremony." Combine sentences.
- "women's slaloml"
- I feel like there should be more info from the newspapers, it does have some quotes and such.
A few things. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:36, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- All done, hopefully to your satisfaction, Nova Crystallis. Courcelles (talk) 12:10, 29 October 2018 (UTC)