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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:36, 29 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]


  • "excepting the" Change to "except the."
  • "The USVI had their only athlete at the 2006 Winter Olympics break her wrist in training," Who?
  • "making Sochi the sixth time athletes had actually competed in the Winter Olympics for the USVI." I think this could be shortened.
  • "Alpine skier Jasmine Campbell was the only athlete the USVI sent to Sochi. Campbell was selected as the flag bearer for both the opening ceremony and closing ceremony." Combine sentences.
  • "women's slaloml"
  • I feel like there should be more info from the newspapers, it does have some quotes and such.

A few things. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:36, 29 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]