Talk:Vinland Saga (TV series)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 20:26, 8 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sangsangaplaz (talk · contribs) 07:02, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Critical Reception

The second paragraph of this section seems a bit long. I recommend looking at In-text attribution guidelines to give it a more neutral look.

Got rid of most quotes.Tintor2 (talk) 13:16, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

There is unnecessary detail in regards to the reviewers. For example “In regards to the first season, Rafael Motamayor of Polygon commended the character development shown in its first three episodes and ultimately enjoyed its portrayal of violence.[53]” could be shortened to “In regards to the first season, Polygon commended the character development shown in its first three episodes and ultimately enjoyed its portrayal of violence.[53]” or something close to it. Sangsangaplaz (Talk to me! I'm willing to help) 11:09, 7 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The review might be a bit slow bit if there aren’t any more comments for a week or so please try to contact me. Sangsangaplaz (Talk to me! I'm willing to help) 11:11, 7 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Revised. THanks Tintor2 (talk) 15:25, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Production

This section is mostly written in first person. This should be changes. For example “The Viking ships were also challenging to model in 3D CGI animation.” could be rewritten as “Yabuta also described the Viking ships as challenging to model in 3D CGI animation.” or something like it. I am not sure who stated this to be honest so my example be factually wrong but the general recommendation stands. @Sangsangaplaz:

Revised.Tintor2 (talk) 18:26, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Music

In this section, the sentences "Yamada's favorite theme was the piano theme in the first episode which he felt fit the story and visuals." and "Yabuta was impressed with Yamada's works, giving for example the first season finale where the music elevates Thorfinn's mental breakdown at Askeladd's death." should be removed.

@Sangsangaplaz: Revised. The second paragraph also needs some copyediting. @Sangsangaplaz: Revised.Tintor2 (talk) 18:31, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]