Talk:Vienen/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 13:11, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Lead

• "Principal filming for "Vienen" was shot at three different locations, including an oil rig, an oil refinery, and the show's set." Using the word 'Including' suggests it's only a part of the whole, I suggest removing it and using a colon to list it.

Production

• "Usually, an episode of The X-Files took about 18 days to film. "Vienen," however, took only 11.", could do with a citation.

Plot

• "Meanwhile, Dana Scully finds black oil in Simon's skull during an autopsy - but the oil is dead, as if irradiated.", remove hyphen and use en or em dash.

Reception

• "The episode subsequently made its debut in Ireland and the United Kingdom on June 7th on Sky 1", remove the ordinal form of 7, per WP:DATES and WP:CONSISTENCY
• "and was the sixth most watched television shows", plural needed?
• "significant development inMulder and Scully's relationship", spot the joint word.
• Should there be spacing in "B- rating"?

Footnotes

• For ref 2, 'BBC Cult' is the work, BBC is the publisher.

Thank you for reviewing this. I believe I've addressed all the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:08, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Overall, a refreshing read. Will pass. – Lemonade51 (talk) 16:41, 20 April 2012 (UTC)