Talk:Video modeling

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Quick review

I took a quick look at this article, spruced up the citations a bit, and have a few comments:

It's clearly a notable topic that should be covered in Wikipedia. Thanks for starting it.
It has too many direct quotes from sources. Generally we should be summarizing sources, not quoting them.
It is clearly promoting video modeling. It should be using a neutral point of view (see WP:NPOV).
It doesn't explain what video modeling is. That should be in the 1st sentence.
It is citing too many primary studies; it should rely on secondary sources such as reviews. See WP:RS and WP:MEDRS (MEDRS is marginally relevant, as video modeling is primarily an education but is also a medical intervention).
Some of the sources are a bit dated; we should be able to stick with stuff published in the last 5 years or so, for an actively researched area like this.
Here are some recent reviews in this area, which might be good sources (I haven't read them all, and don't have access to them all):

Delano ME (2007). "Video modeling interventions for individuals with autism". Remed Spec Educ. 28 (1): 33–42. doi:10.1177/07419325070280010401.
Rayner C, Denholm C, Sigafoos J (2008). "Video-based intervention for individuals with autism: key questions that remain unanswered". Res Autism Spectr Disord. doi:10.1016/j.rasd.2008.09.001.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)
Matson JL, Matson ML, Rivet TT (2007). "Social-skills treatments for children with autism spectrum disorders: an overview". Behav Modif. 31 (5): 682–707. doi:10.1177/0145445507301650. PMID 17699124.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)
Darden-Brunson F, Green A, Goldstein H (2008). "Video-based instruction for children with autism". In Luiselli JK, Russo DC, Christian WP, Wilcyznski SM (eds.) (ed.). Effective Practices for Children with Autism. Oxford University Press. pp. 241–68. ISBN 0195317041. {{cite book}}: |editor= has generic name (help)CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)

Eubulides (talk) 09:23, 22 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]