Talk:Vettore Cappello/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:42, 4 November 2018 (UTC)
I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:42, 4 November 2018 (UTC)
- No DABs, external links OK
- Images properly licensed.
- Clarify that Sant'Elena is a church in the caption to the lede photo.
- Done.
- De-link the second usage of Captain general of the sea
- You mean in the article body? I follow the rule of always linking in the first occurrence in the body, not counting the lede, per MOS:DUPLINK.
- You're not wrong, but this isn't a short enough article to warrant linking it twice, IMO. It's fine if you think differently.
- You mean in the article body? I follow the rule of always linking in the first occurrence in the body, not counting the lede, per MOS:DUPLINK.
- savio "recuperandi pecunias" Can you explain a little what this is? Constantine ✍ 13:27, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
- It was evidently one of the boards of savi or wise men, and had fiscal duties ("recuperandi pecunias" means something like "for the recovery of funds"), but I haven't found any source on the details of the functions of this office. I don't even know whether this was a regular magistracy (unlikely since I can't find it mentioned anywhere else) or an ad hoc post.
- by overssing fortification works in Coron, Modon, Nauplia, Lepanto, and Negroponte, until his tenure expired in November Awkward. Reinforcing, repairing, etc.? Plus the typo
- Done.
- In September he was elected a member of the Ten. Out of chronological sequence--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:35, 11 November 2018 (UTC)
- Forgot to add the year there, it is actually September 1465.
- Hi Sturmvogel 66, thanks for taking this on. I've dealt with or otherwise replied to the issues you pointed out. Anything else, even above and beyond GA requirements? Constantine ✍ 13:27, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
- The article gives enough context I think, but this is a period I actually know something about, so I'm probably not the best judge.
- There are a couple of overlinks in the main body that need to be removed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:13, 13 November 2018 (UTC)