Talk:Vestal Masturbation T-shirt/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. PARAKANYAA (talk) 18:46, 21 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: ISD (talk · contribs) 06:55, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: PARAKANYAA (talk · contribs) 18:46, 21 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have to quickfail this, as it is in my view a long way from fulfilling criterion 3, being broad in its coverage, and to rectify this a lot will have to be done. This article does not explain the main beats of the controversy or even basic facts, gives little background, and is basically just a WP:PROSELINE listing of individual incidents instead of a cohesive work explaining how, why, and commentary. This is a narrow topic, so it should be relatively easy to mine the existing sources for information and create a more broad article. There just has to be... more, which is possible given that a glance at the sources shows there is much that isn't here.

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