Talk:Venus Doom/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (23.1% is highest, due to quotes which are correctly attributed) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

• Released on 14 September 2007, the album was recorded at Finnvox Studios in Helsinki, Finland, with producers Hiili Hiilesmaa and Tim Palmer, both whom had collaborated with the band on various occasions. suggest you change this to The album was recorded at Finnvox Studios in Helsinki, Finland, with producers Hiili Hiilesmaa and Tim Palmer, both whom had collaborated with the band on various occasions, and released on 14 September 2007
• The making-of Venus Doom was plagued with personal problems vocalist Ville Valo was facing at the time suggest During the making of Venus Doom, HIM was struggling with the personal problems of their vocalist Ville Valo.
• @SilverBullitt: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 23:07, 16 March 2018 (UTC)