Talk:Venus Consoling Love
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File:Venus Consoling Love, François Boucher, 1751.jpg to appear as POTD soon
[edit]Hello! This is a note to let the editors of this article know that File:Venus Consoling Love, François Boucher, 1751.jpg will be appearing as picture of the day on February 14, 2018. You can view and edit the POTD blurb at Template:POTD/2018-02-14. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 04:54, 16 January 2018 (UTC)
Needs some grammar and sentence structure attention
[edit]I suppose it ought to wait until after it is no longer the POTD, but there are a number of things in this article that need correction, including grammatical errors, awkward phrasings, and opinions that lack the needed NPOV. One egregious example of the last is the sentence that announces "The painting was made with high technical skill." Since this is a famous classic painting, it seems that the skillful execution would go without saying (otherwise nobody'd care about it). If the skill level is high enough to remark upon, perhaps it needs a reference to a credible source as to the particularity of the excellence. Otherwise this sentence is superfluous. Cyberherbalist (talk) 02:39, 14 February 2018 (UTC)