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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:28, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
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- Three paras in lead is too much for this modest article, I would reduce to two.
- I get that, but I'm not sure how to do that without omitting any important information. --HistoryofIran (talk) 18:53, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
"successor of Arshusha II." link. I note it's linked in the succession box, so no reason not to link it here.- "
bidaxshes.[4][1][5] Albeit" ref order. - "
Sasanian Empire.[15][13] " ref order. - "Bolnisi Sioni in Iberia" our article says it's in the "Bolnisi village of Bolnisi District, Georgia", should we put the modern name here?
- No imho, it was known as Iberia at that time. --HistoryofIran (talk) 18:49, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
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suzerainty" link? "husband.[22][23][13]" ref order.Where is the Genealogy section referenced?Refs 9 and 10, pp. and en-dash.ISBNs consistently formatted.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:51, 10 September 2021 (UTC)