Talk:Valkyria Chronicles III/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:48, 12 February 2016 (UTC)
I may as well make myself useful and clear some backlog... JAGUAR 22:48, 12 February 2016 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- "The game began development in 2010" - how about Development of the game began in 2010
- "It met with positive sales in Japan, and was praised by both Japanese and Western critics" - should western be capitalised here?
- "in order to send them on missions that would otherwise make Gallia lose face internationally" - I don't understand this part
- "Valkyria Chronicles III topped sales charts both for its native PlayStation Portable and across multi-platform statistics" - but wasn't it only released for the PSP? How does multi-platform statistics apply here?
- No dead links
I couldn't find anything worthy to put this on hold, so I'll pass it outright. Well done on all the work! 
JAGUAR 12:46, 14 February 2016 (UTC)