Talk:Urban heat inequity
Feedback from New Page Review process
[edit]I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for this new article, on an important topic. You've chosen references well! Just noting a few technical things I've recently fixed, and you might want to keep in mind for future articles: use sentence case for headings, add the reflist (or similar) template to locate the references automatically, and add categories so that your articles can be found even if not linked from other pages. Linking from elsewhere is also important. Also, the first sentence described what the topic was 'based on', but not what it is - be more direct in the first sentence.
Klbrain (talk) 06:56, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
Wiki Education assignment: ENGW3303 Adv. Writing for the Environmental Professions
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 9 January 2024 and 17 April 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Egb27 (article contribs).
— Assignment last updated by EnvrSci (talk) 17:47, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
Wiki Education assignment: ENGW3303 Adv. Writing for the Environmental Professions
[edit]Hi there! Apologies for the late peer review for ENGW3303. I thought I had posted to the talk page, but it didn’t save! I think you have a really great article here. The structure is good, and the three sections are logical and easy for a reader to follow. If you still wanted to improve the article, I would recommend adding more sources if possible. It looks like sources 1 and 5 are heavily relied upon compared to the others. Additionally, this article could potentially benefit from including a map of a city as an example to show heat inequity amongst different neighborhoods. Overall, really great job with this! Anoukbraun (talk) 00:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC)