Talk:Until It Beats No More/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 22:30, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):
b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Infobox

No issues

Lead

No issues

Background

No issues

Music and lyrics

According to WP:SAMPLE, audio recordings have to be 10% or less than the original recording (it is currently 29 seconds and needs to be 23.2 seconds or less)

I will upload a new sample in a few minutes. Statυs (talk) 23:04, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done Statυs (talk) 23:18, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

No issues

Fiat commercial

No issues

Credits and personnel

No issues

Charts

No issues

References

Reference 1 → "MTV News" should not be italicized and also needs to be wiki-linked
Reference 5 → "Rap-Up" should not be wiki-linked

Done Statυs (talk) 23:04, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues that you believe do not concern the good article criteria. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 22:54, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All issues have been addressed, so I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 23:22, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]