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Pointless Truisms and Almost Incoherent Text

The paragraph that appears just before the subsection "Major Subordinate Units" is nothing but a pair of truisms that say nothing about the organization known as the United States Army Sustainment Command. It goes without saying that the sustainment function can be tailored to individual situations and that logistics is more difficult when it involves a geographically remote location. Actually, I'm being generous in my assessment of the second sentence, which is what is referred to in the subject line as "incoherent text."

In short, this paragraphs adds zero information regarding U.S. Army Sustainment Command and should be deleted in its entirety.

I look forward to any comments or suggestions before I delete the two sentences that comprise it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MrStiv (talk • contribs) 14:45, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]