Talk:Unfinished Tales/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 17:03, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:16, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

• Lead's too short and doesn't contain any information from Analysis.
  • Extended.

• I've performed a minor copy-edit, no other prose concerns.
  • Noted.

• Not necessary, but maybe put in an appropriate image in the analysis section.
  • Added.

• References are reliable and correctly formatted.
  • Noted, thanks.

• Olsen, Corey (2014). "Unfinished Tales". Mythgard Institute. Signum University. Link automatically triggers a blocker for some reason.
  • Doesn't trigger my blocker app. There's nothing much wrong with Mythgard.
    • No, I meant that Mythgard blocks me from accessing it for some reason.

• Spot-checks:
  • Barkley, Christine (1996). "Point of View in Tolkien". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
  • Riga, Frank P.; Thum, Maureen; Kollmann, Judith (2014). "From Children's Book to Epic Prequel: Peter Jackson's Transformation of Tolkien's The Hobbit". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
  • Kocher, Paul H. (1981). "Reviews: Unfinished Tales". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
  • Noted.

• All I really have. AryKun (talk) 13:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:36, 16 August 2023 (UTC)