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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 December 2021 and 12 January 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dm0507. Peer reviewers: Adrienne Workman.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 09:18, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review Feedback

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Check for readability: The article is generally well-written and clear, with a target audience that likely includes medical professionals. However, some sentences could maybe be simplified for improved readability but the topic in itself is pretty complex.

Adherence to topic / Not getting off track: It stays on the topic without deviating or going off on tangents. Goes into detail when appropriate.

Organization & Flow: Logical flow from background to mechanism, uses, and limitations that I expect from a wikipedia article. Could benefit from a larger mechanism section.

Use of images and figures: No images but images of this technology could be proprietary or cause copyright concerns

Proper use of citations: Citations are used frequently and appropriately

Paraphrasing: Articles appears to have adequate paraphrasing

Quality Sources: Uses review articles

Check for bias and equal-sided arguments: Uses words like may or could, appropriately avoiding bias and not making claims.   Rsclydesdale (talk) 22:13, 9 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]