Talk:Ugly (Sugababes song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 1 April 2012 (UTC) Hello, I will be reviewing this article. 17:13, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Thankyou, Calvin! Till I Go Home (talk) 07:37, 2 April 2012 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

Resolved comments

• Use {{duration|m=3|s=02}} and {{duration|m=3|s=50}}

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• Remove the extra tracklising for the album. It's not needed.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Lead

Resolved comments

• "who primarily produced Taller in More Ways." → Sounds like he got first say on producing the album. Change to "who produced the majority of Taller in More Ways.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• If you are going to have a quote in the lead then you need to put the source for it.

 Done, Removed quote. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• link [[Music journalism|music critics]]

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• I'll do a slight c/e at the end.

Thanks. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Background and release

Resolved comments

• Link Taller in more Ways the firs time.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• was an inspiration for the song. → remove "an"

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

Resolved comments

• Need a much better rationale for the audio file. How long is it? What does it present to the listener?

 Done. Expanded it. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• I guess there's no much info for the composition but you've done well with what you have.

Critical reception

Resolved comments

• "Ugly" has received positive reviews from music critics. → "Ugly" garnered positive reviews from music critics.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• This section is very quotey, can you paraphrase some of them?
• Could do with a bit of refining.

Chart performance

Resolved comments

• This section needs work. Do you want me to c/e it?

Yes please. Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

I think you mean "chart performance" since you already reviewed the critical reception up there (above)? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:47, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Yes Lol. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:16, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

Promotion - Music video

Resolved comments

• Any reviews?

Nope. It was a pain to even get info about the music video itself. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Lol. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

Promotion - Live performances

Resolved comments

• 2006 alongside singles → as part of a set list, which included

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• You say that their performances were praised by critics, so can you say what the critics actually said?

 Done. Quoted the critics' words. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Track listings

Resolved comments

• Remove the release dates.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• Single should not to be capitalised.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• Play should not to be capitalised.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

Resolved comments

• Where are the credits adapted from? Write it instead of "Source"

 Done. Wrote Discogs. If I get the album, I will change it. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Hmm okay. Can't you try ASCAP or BMI? Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

Charts - Weekly charts

Resolved comments

• Please can you have marked up the table according to WP:ACCESS :)

Don't understand :S Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

You've done it lol. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

• It says 2005/06. There should be two separate tables, one for peaks in 2005, one for peaks in 2006.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Charts - Year-end charts

Resolved comments

• Mark up the table according to WP:ACCESS. Look at S&M's for example.

What's mark up? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Done it for you. Aaron • ^{You Da One}

• Again, tables should be separated.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

Release hsitory

Resolved comments

• No issues :).

References

Resolved comments

• Ensure titles aren't in complete capitcals
• It is now Official Charts Company, without the "The"

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• Ref 7 is missing a publisher.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• Ref 29 is missing a publisher.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• Ref 30 is missing a publisher.

 Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• Unlinked ref 47's work and publisher parameters and link ref 13's.

  I can't. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

• iTunes references are perfect!

Summary

Good job, on hold for 7 days. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 21:58, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

• All done :). passed. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)

• Thanks :) Till I Go Home (talk) 03:01, 18 April 2012 (UTC)