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GA Review

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Below is my review:

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
    • Lead: 'Tucker sailed off the east coast and in the Caribbean' - Not quite elegant
    • Design and construction: 'the great, great, granddaughter' - I am not sure if comma is the right way to go here. I think hyphens should be used.
    • Post-war: 'Departing from Brest for the last time on 16 December 1918, she headed for Boston, and a period of repairs in the navy yard.' - either incomplete or confusing.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    • Tucker was acquired by the coast guard on 25 March (according to text) and on 26 March (according to infobox) - something is not right here.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
Thanks - DSachan (talk) 14:06, 15 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I think I've addressed all points. Thanks for the review. — Bellhalla (talk) 17:39, 15 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]