Talk:USS Montana (ACR-13)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:50, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs, external links OK.
Images appropriately licensed.
Don't know if we really need five digits of precision on the beam in the infobox.
- Good point
Fix the rounding of the belt armor in the infobox.
- Fixed - it was in cm for some reason.
Spell out caliber on first use in the main body.
- Done
two four-cylinder vertical expansion remember to vary spelling vs digits for dissimilar things, add a comma after cylinder and a hyphen between vertical and expansion.
- Good catch, all fixed
3-pounder automatic guns and four 1-pounders What are these guns, Hotchkiss revolvers and Briggs-Schroeders? And add these to the infobox.
- Dunno on the types, but added to the infobox.
Kinda overlinking by repeating links already in the lede, which the script will not detect.
- I generally prefer to link in both places, which I think is acceptable per WP:OVERLINK
Guantanamo Bay, Cuba comma after Cuba
- Added
Should probably link all nations on first use as many readers are geographically illiterate.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:36, 20 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Sadly, a good point. I think I've got them all. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 19:06, 23 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]